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If you could add a link for the YSE and the year that'd be great.
It looks like the formatting on the physical description is a little funky with the :'s if you want to give that a look over.
The "h" in height needs to be capitalised.
"valor. Acting" is a little grammatical error there.
Inventory header is broken.
Asking @FrostJaeger for a check over because I'm not clued up enough into the Caelisolian Project to know if their names would be scrubbed etc.
Other than that, DoB, personality, social connections and everything else looks great, skills is enough because it's an optional section anyway
Once you make those few changes reply to notify me here. If Frost doesn't reply by the weekend I'll approve it provisionally until he does once it's been changed, though I have every confidence he will.
Given that character articles are OOC documents, would you mind adding a surname to Zazriel and his family, please? The following generators are, in my humble opinion, pretty good sources of inspiration:
For the Skills Learned section, would you mind adding three more character skill areas (each with one or two sentence's worth of description), please? I'd recommend taking the following:
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