Wiki: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=yuki_toshiro
Firstly, I left the battle Kenichi was in pretty open-ended, simply because I didn't know enough about the RP's history to give a battle name, and if I DID give a battle or ship name, that would have been the retroactive assignment of an NPC, which could have been trouble, especially if Toshiro ever met someone assigned to that ship. Kenichi is missing, and since no battle or ship was given, no plot-holes.
Secondly, I can see what you mean about the skills...after some thought, there are some things that can be done:
For Engineering, Toshiro has a good ingenuity skill as shown by the Yggdrasill, but perhaps I should just start him off in more basic general knowledge, and have him learn as I learn (when IC reasons are given, of course, likely have him find new tech while scavenging and learn more as he went) so maybe Engineering will be skill in conventional technologies, and research skills to learn more as he finds new things.
Leadership he can learn as time goes on, though his nature gives him some leadership attributes already, like openmindedness, respect, and inginutiy.
Medical I don't think needs to be compromised on too much, except maybe the "multiple races" part. He should be able to treat humans, Geshrin, Yamataians, and other basic types of humanoid beings. He's no doctor, more like an equivalent of an EMT, perhaps. That's not something that's hard to learn, one semester of first aid at a community college or a high school can reach you the things I listed, and basic human anatomy could be another semester.
Knowledge, he should still learn as much as possible, but he need not start of knowing so much, I suppose. Still, he should be able to know some things about his trade, and at least be able to identify basic component types and systems, and know how to repair them. He also needs to know enough to have opinions and ideals.
Starship Operations neededn't change too much, as it applies more to the Yggdrasill's custom systems, though he could figure out basic functions on another ship if he had to, especially if it was another Vampire-type.
Technology operations...Not sure what to do here. He needs at least SOME programming skill to build the Yggdrasill's systems and link them together properly. Logic and efficiency are also plausible, though perhaps he needn't the ability to code a sentient AI right away. More study for him.
Fighting may become an eventual necessity, but right now, his battle experience is nill, so it isn't even listed to begin with.
The big battles should be taken out, I casn see that now. Perhaps the RP should start on the Yggdrasill's first real non-test run...
It doesn't make him too spectacular, but he can improve with time.
Are those modifications acceptable?
If they are, I'll post a revised version of the bio. If not, please tell me what else needs done.
Edit: might as well post the edit now. ^^
Name: Yuki Toshiro
General Information
Species: Yamataian
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Family (or Creators): Born in YE 11 to Yuki Daisuke and Yuki Yuriko. Had one older brother in the Star Army of Yamatai, Pilot Yuki Kenichi, MIA, YE 26, aged 20 at the time. Presumed Deceased in Line of Duty. Has two younger sisters, Yuki Mariko, aged 15, and Yuki Shinobu, aged 7.
Employer: None
Occupation: Search, Rescue, Salvage, possibly Mining
Rank: N/A
Current Assignment: N/A
Physical Characteristics
Height: 6' 0â€
