Approved Character [Zenjinkaze] Gunnhild Grimsdottir

[SirSkully]

Here is my neko, crazy gunslinger thingo.

@Reynolds and (iirc) @Ametheliana

 

[Ametheliana]

Probably a good idea to list someone she knows. I have Fort Hajime with some people she could have trained with. Be warned, Eriko once ST'd someone back to life in order to beat them up!! :0

Cool name!!

 

[SirSkully]

Hmmm, any suggestions as to what I should put there? I'm a little stumped

 

[club24]

i had to do it with my elysians, just stick a random name and call them a friend

 

[SirSkully]

I just ended up doing that, I hope it is okay

 

[Ametheliana]

Awesome, that is ok. I will defer to @Reynolds for the rest of this review.

 

[SirSkully]

kewl

 

[Reynolds]

I made a few small edits, added some links, fixed some typos.

The only issue I have is that the mention of Ninjutsu comes out of nowhere and doesn't match the rest of the character. I think it would work better if you reworked that Skill to just say she knows SACQC and is working on fleshing out her personal style that uses two handguns. You may also want to highlight the pros and cons of this style, since you're losing out on the free hand you'd use for strikes, throws and joint manipulation.

Work on that a bit and we should be good, thanks.

 

[SirSkully]

alright, I'll get onto changing that

 

[SirSkully]

okay it has been edited, lmk if there are still issues with it.

 

[Reynolds]

Alright, everything looks good to me! This is APPROVED if @Ametheliana can sort it for me. I'll get you up on the plot page in a moment.