Approved Character Jack Pine

[Jack Pine]

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:jack_pine

 

[Air Admiral]

You'll want to put that in a wiki article.

 

[Ace]

This is a wiki code dude. You post this on a wiki page you make.
Also I already run a PMC plot myself called Psychopomp.

 

[Jack Pine]

You'll want to put that in a wiki article.

i did and just copy and pasted the wiki code for the character application cuz the wiki and forum being separate are really messing with me so if i doe something wrong please forgive me i'm still trying to figure this out and any help would be greatly appreciated

 

[Air Admiral]

Sure. I'm new myself, and I've found the community to be very supportive!

 

[Jack Pine]

This is a wiki code dude. You post this on a wiki page you make.
Also I already run a PMC plot myself called Psychopomp.

wait so is the app for the forum different then because well i thought they were the same and two what is your plot because it sounds interesting

 

[Ace]

Here

 

[Wes]

I found he's got a wiki page here: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:jack_pine

 

[Jack Pine]

i changed the post to the link sorry for the trouble

 

[Ace]

its cool you're new

 

[Ace]

Again my plot is Psychopomp we are doing the PMC side of it and are still well understaffed when it comes to played charters but we manage.
I'd love to get you in on it when we get your character straightened out cause right now its lacking in a few areas.

 

[Ace]

@Zack pinging you since he has 188604 on preferred plots

 

[Arbitrated]

Hm? Thread caught my eye and we've got '604 involved, interesting...


After reading: I suggest you go through the wiki page with a fine-toothed comb, adding in capitalization at the beginning of sentences and such. I also recommend you split some things up, such as the paragraph about his inventory, to make it easier to read and such.

 

[Zack]

I'm not sure I have the time to really do a new player justice. I'm going to tag @Alex Hart and @ArsenicJohn to see if they can help.

I'll try and give a look today.

 

[Ace]

Here's an example of one of my characters

 

[Zack]

I think the first major thing we need to tackle is Nexus Private Security. Is this a one man operation? If so its not a big deal but if you're wanting a larger group then you'll need to start writing that up as well.

Your wiki article could also use some formatting and spell checking. Are you writing this on a phone or mobile device?

 

[Alex Hart]

If you want to join 188604, we've got spots open in the sky guard.

 

[Jack Pine]

I think the first major thing we need to tackle is Nexus Private Security. Is this a one man operation? If so its not a big deal but if you're wanting a larger group then you'll need to start writing that up as well.

Your wiki article could also use some formatting and spell checking. Are you writing this on a phone or mobile device?

laptop

 

[Alex Hart]

Do you happen to like mecha or variable fighters? The mecha team could use a sniper.

 

[Jack Pine]

laptop

on the faction thing, its just my character and the one named Zeke who really won't be like around but he'll just be like the guy Jack talks to for intel and information updates and stuff