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Here's some fixes this article still needs:
Random capitalization of Power armor needs to get modified, along with the and found here: "...or shape, And more..."
The random capitalizations are not necessary in the excerpt below. Moreover, I would re-word it to say, "capable of sundering armor" as well as tube-like with a hyphen:
"...Tube like barrels on its side that deliver a blast of directed force, Sundering armor."
Can you make note of what is inside? I am looking for what it is that is in direct contact with her hands.
Is the only added feature that it can shoot, basically? I don't think she is using ammo, she is using the concussive engine through those barrels, right? Does she need to be literally touching her target for this to happen (like at the point of contact of a punch) or can she just point n boom? Clarify that for me in-article, please.
Is there a reason it was not made current year?
Cute and good punch glove, I love.