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$15 Character Artworks from Zairyo

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Hoshitomo Rin

Haven't forgotten about the hat, just need to know if this is the hairstyle wanted as there were no references.

 
Ah, my turn sure came up quickly! It is definitely looking good, maybe need very minor hair style or face tweaking, yes.
I do have reference pics linked right near the top on my wiki page, though... perhaps you missed them in a rush?

http://i648.photobucket.com/albums/uu203/paladin_rpg/sa-rin3.jpg
http://i648.photobucket.com/albums/uu203/paladin_rpg/sa-rin4.jpg

This is also an older one, but still good:
http://storen.rpgcafe.net/imagelinks/sa-rin.jpg

That should be all you need to get a feel for the hair style and attitude I was going for. If you feel her character page is missing some other info, please let me know. Other than that, you're all good... find the flow and don't rush it. Many thanks for your hard work.
 
Yup, completely missed them. I don't read the full profile, I go in this order

  1. name
  2. art (when available)
  3. species
  4. physical characteristics
  5. personality (skimmed if it's too long)
  6. rank (usually at the coloring stage)


Hair OK now or do you want me to cover one eye with it? All 3 hairstyles in the references are different.
 
Don't worry about covering the eye... that was primarily her "old" style while enlisted and proving herself (included it to show a comparison and example of the pose). As an officer, she has "opened up" a bit more, therefore the change in style commensurate with the migration to Minkan body type.
 
No internet again, I apologize. You'll hear from me soon (I'm delayed in EVERYTHING)
 
Okay. Thanks for the update!
 
Looks good to me. I like how her face is coming along, it seems positive without being outright happy (Tsukisaki and her definitely have problems with smiling, heh)
 
Great! Just perhaps a bit more lighter blue tone on the hair. I usually describe it as teal or icey blue.in RP. Other than that its awesome.
 
Woo, there's a nice little texture for whatever she's holding.

I think she looks great. Is it normal that she reminds me of PaladinRPG's avatar?
 
Problem with the next one Charalampos Ambrosia
Profile doesn't have a Physical Characteristics section.
Also there's a note

Notes: Wings Spread, arms extended, legs slightly crossed as if walking, with a calm serene look on her face.


But no reference for the wings. I haven't checked the other one so, please make sure you guys have the references, don't assume I know everything or that I will read the whole profile in the hopes of finding what I'm missing. Again this is what I look at in the profile:

  1. name
  2. art (when available)
  3. species (which hopefully has a link)
  4. physical characteristics
  5. personality (skimmed if it's too long)
  6. rank (usually at the coloring stage)
Thank you.
 
I've had a hard and stressful day so far today, but frankly this made me cry tears of joy. Thank you so much, Zairyo. You're the best! <3

Woo, there's a nice little texture for whatever she's holding.

I think she looks great. Is it normal that she reminds me of PaladinRPG's avatar?
The texture is for a Star Army Type 33 Datapad, and I agree it looks really keen. And it should remind you of my avatar since I am always trying to find something closer to Rin, but now no need to borrow an image from another anime... original art ftw.
 
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