Conveniently,
@Zack I happen to not have
@FrostJaeger blocked, so I will happily let you see the requested edits, in order:
4th Great Elysian Empire
As it violates Declaration 1, would you please make the following edit in the
4th Great Elysian Celestial Empire article's
History section? The word that needs to be changed has been bolded.
"This small group would choose to settle in a system that was named Purgatory, and given the area designation 000-604 on
their maps to signify their new starting point."
System 000604
As it violates Declaration 1, would you please make the following edit in the
4th Great Elysian Celestial Empire article's
History section? The word that needs to be changed has been bolded.
"This small group would choose to settle in a system that was named Purgatory, and given the area designation 000-604 on
their maps to signify their new starting point."
Ordained Triumph Warship
As it violates Declarations 2 and 3, would you please remove the following text from the
Ordained Triumph Elysian Warship article's
Ship Systems section? The text that needs to be removed has been slashed through.
"Mostly new equipment is contained inside of the ship
, as a focused effort on upgrading and replacing the old technology has removed a lot of the older gear present from the previous Elysian wars. The interior of the ship is mostly unlit equipment areas serviced by remote-operated machinery. The living areas of the ship can support a crew of up to 50, though the ship is usually crewed by a captain and up to two support officers to manage tasks while the captain is asleep."
B7R-604 History
The following text needs to be removed from the
B7R-604 article's
History section, as it violates Declaration 1. The text that needs to be removed has been slashed through.
"The
star system B7R-604 was originally charted by Elysians long ago, though modern history for the planet doesn't start until YE 10 when colonists from Nepleslia came to found a settlement. The planet itself had the correct amount of gravity for a comfortable life, however it lacked in atmosphere and water. Over the next three decades the colonists would re-direct comets towards the planet to provide it with life-sustaining water as well as attempt to establish various biospheres which could support life."