Apologies for the delay in posting a review,
@Jack Pine. >.<
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Here are some fixes this sub-article still needs:
- Would you mind adding a brief sentence to the sections with a "FIXME" in them, please?
- Would you mind adding the performance statistics (specifically, those found on the ammunition template) for the .50cal variant of the Sutafaia Fusion Shell, please? I know there's some listed on the SFS article, but they appear to be for the 50mm variant.
When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!
Status: Pending
Note: Also,
@Alex Hart - are there any ballistics-related values that should be changed?