Just a few things here:
- I'm having trouble finding where Star Army Command/Taisho Yui ordered the Forth Fleet to become focused on border patrol. A strange designation for a fleet that has a territory to manage like all the other standard fleets. - Can you show me? @Wes @Ethereal
- Please remove the phrase "There are no prerequisites for this occupation. "
- I still see an issue with this overlapping with the YSA's mandate. As Demi said, I think I'd rather see the YSA's mandate lore expanded than see it land as a MOS in the Star Army. A MOS solely exists in one fleet, a fleet that has no active plots so therefore no players would be in this MOS.
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I think this one still requires more discussions and decisions.