alrightly, Ameme has asked me to help her with getting these articles done and, yes I'm not an official reviewer so all that I say in these threads is merely suggestion based on the guidelines I've experienced and my thoughts and interpretations, I can't actually approve them.
1. Akemi Hut Jr., "an Usoda" im not well versed in Akemi products so I assume Usoda is pronounced oo-soda to make the "an" viable in this situation
2. More About Akemi Hut Jr., first paragraph, "business fast food chain" just my personal thoughts here but "fast food business chain" reads better ^^
3. More About Akemi Hut Jr., second paragraph, "The reality of the situation that the word “family” was in Koga Akemi's repertoire." insert an is, between situation and that, alternatively remove that and place a comma after situation to help read better. Place an "already" between was and in.
Please link YE 40 to satisfy my link OCD and I think there is something about linking in guidelines?
4. More About Akemi Hut Jr., forth paragraph, "Thank goodness for Nekovalkyrja stamina. Akemi has recently taken up more body weight exercises to become stronger than Uso Tasuki, which he will do within the year according to estimates." this text seems slightly unrelated to the particular article and rather is more centered on Akemi himself.
"The company has a lot of PR put into it" this could use a "had" between has and a to read in past tense, im not sure what the ruling on wiki is for tense but i know on the site past is preferred and to me at least, wiki articles are a past tense documentation of something that now exists in the setting, considering if someone were to read the article a month later present tense can be iffy at times.
5. Watamote, this section is extra when compared to the Business template, and could probably be renamed to "Mascot" with description below, this section could also include part of the paragraph above it where it mentions families playing with the mascot. For example,
"Mascot"
"The official mascot of Akemi Hut Jr. is Watamote, a very weary-looking, almost humanoid, egg with a pink yolk and perpetual blush who is often displayed in advertising material playing with various families of race and creed."
6. General Information, please include some text below the heading and before the table
7. Facilities, please use correct and full spelling of though, alternatively remove it and replace the comma with a period/full-stop.
FINAL COMMENTS
Overall this fast food chain meets the criteria standards I'm used to as I work in the industry IRL, it has an overall name and idea with different themes based on location which is an important part in attracting customers as any marketing analyst will tell you.
The menu provided caters to its intended customers, being children primarily from the naming and will not leave adults eating three meals just to fill up at the same time.
The structure of management described is also more or less a simplified version of how these chains operate, regional managers are a large part of it. It could be expanded out to include restaurant managers and regional administrators but it doesn't need it to be a complete article in my view.