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Rejected Submission C9 'Pine Class Optionally Manned Warship'

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Zack

Zack

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Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=wip:faction:uso:c9
Submission Type: Starship
Template Used: Starship
Submission WIP URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:uso:c9
Submission Destination URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:uso:c9

Faction: USO
FM Approved Yet? Yes
Faction requires art? Yes

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes
In addition to the articles up for approval elsewhere as part of the: C8: https://stararmy.com/roleplay-forum/index.php?threads/c8.62053/ and U7 : https://stararmy.com/roleplay-forum/index.php?threads/u7b-command-craft.62173/ There are:
- https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:uso:c4_interstellar_jet
- https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:uso:sutafaia_defense_system
- https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:uso:c9shivaturret
- https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:uso:c9verticallaunchcell

Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? No

Notes: Hi Ame
 
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Balls. The system components are still laid out like the C8 so things aren’t all where they should be there. I’ll get that fixed this afternoon.
 
I believe in the C8 thread here @Ametheliana meant for the C8 facility to be lowered 1 Tier in damage...can I get confirmation? The wording may not have been clear.
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To me this means “8 Tier 14 guns” not “8 Tier 15 guns” from Ame’s “it can only carry 8 weapons of the same tier” statement.
 
You are misunderstanding. I asked for the number of weapons to be lowered, not the tier itself.
 
while i understand people have lives outside of sarp, i also understand where zack is coming from, i dont mind how long it takes for my stuff but its good to get told it will be three days rather than told one day and wait three sorta thing, means i can plan accordingly ^^
 
Yeah, if you say you're going to do something either do it then or post an update to reset the expectation. This is basic process everyone should be following everywhere.
 
Other than the radiator issue (which, quite frankly, would be okay if you just made it thicker...or had an "elephant-ear" design where during overheat cycles radiators would lift away from the ship) it seems like the precedent for ship-splitting is passed, which is the big issue.

Other issues I can't deal with due to the fact they're out of my jurisdiction but whatever.

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Kuuga Approves
 
So I only just noticed but Zack has once again cheated the rules in an attempt to over-arm his ships.

Weapons Systems

The frontal section of the ship contains 12 15 meter diameter laser facilities pumped by 1296 Laser Containers which feed laser energy to the focusing array through optical cables.

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"Cheated the Rules" Isn't there a rule about the NTSE mods having to be respectful that isn't being followed here?

It looks like I coped the weapons section from the C8, and then didn't edit the fluff text at the beginning. The weapon listing is correct and what was talked about in this approval thread and the fluff text is clearly off. I'll go in and fix that now.
 
I feel like the C8 should have been scrutinized more, but due to that it set a precedent for the C9 being overtiered. We'll need to fix the C8 before the C9.
 
Isn’t the C8 limited to only eight T15 weapons, though, @META_mahn? It has twelve emitters, yeah - but if memory serves it can only use eight of them at any given point in time, regardless of what the article’s language may imply.
 
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