WolfWard said:As Sune mentioned room assignments, she wondered who would go where. Wondering where Sune was going with her question about adjustments to crew quarters, Hotaru paid closer attention.
Hey WolfWard, Sune is a male.
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WolfWard said:As Sune mentioned room assignments, she wondered who would go where. Wondering where Sune was going with her question about adjustments to crew quarters, Hotaru paid closer attention.
Once everyone had done their paperwork and said their oaths, Hanako began to give them a tour of the ship.
First, you do not need to narrate or post for Hanako. Second, this "time traveling" is really starting to irritate me. If Hanako is already done with the tour, don't post things like "Hanako began to give them a tour." Once the scene has moved on, let's avoid breaking it by moving the action back to the past.They then proceeded down to the other sections of the ship, which finally ended at the cargo bay. There, Hanako asked of any questions from the group about the ship.
[url=https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=stararmy:characters:3banclzy]Star Army Characters[/url] said:Please order names by LAST NAME, FIRST NAME. For Japanese names, family names remain first.
Wes said: