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Faroresama's Commissions thread

Hey all, I was recently commissioned by Wes to do 4 full body portraits so I thought it would be a good idea to get a forum account so I can post the sketches here for approval and get feedback and whatnot. ^^

So I've read as much as I can about the characters I'll be drawing, but if I make a mistake about something don't hesitate to correct me!

I'll post the commissions I've been assigned and any questions/thoughts I have about them that anyone can answer.

Right now my commissions are:
Aripael Goriass--Should I draw in him in Senator clothing or the uniform for the Navy? Or does it matter?
Matthew Lionheart--I just can NOT find an illustration of a flash patch that goes on his uniform hat! Please help ;_;
Elysian Patrician for CCG--Based on a suggestion Wes showed me from another user, I'll probably do a female Paragon. Thoughts?
Elysian Plebian for CCG--Based on the same suggestion, this will probably be a male Plebian Navy soldier. Any extra info on their uniforms would be very helpful.

The first sketch I'll probably do is the Patrician since it's a little more experimental than the others, so I won't have to worry about messing up as much from the get-go ^^;
 
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It is Iyko, with an "i".

I like this insofar! I think the wings should probably be a bit longer, but all things considered that is awesome and amazing. You kick ass forever.
 
It looks fine to me. ^_^;;
 
If it's not too late to change things, she should probably be taller. She looks kind of short right now, and Patricians are generally taller in relation to humans.
 
Yes, I know. I kept that in mind but there's nothing else in the picture to compare her height to ^^; But if you want her to 'look' taller without a comparison I can probably lengthen her legs since I think they need to be lengthened anyway.

Anything else?
 
Yes, but body proportions give hints on the person's height. Most people's heads are roughly the same size, for example.
 
Here's the updated sketch, with lengthened wings, legs, and neck.

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I can see the difference between this one and the first one in terms of how tall she looks.
 
Ok, so a few questions:

Is there a common hair color? Or is there a hair color Elysians canNOT have?

Are their wings only white or can they be other colors as well?
 
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