CadetNewb
Well-Known Member
Um, in all seriousness though, I don't mean to stump you guys really hard. Considering the situation though, you guys have made pretty good progress; you're just on the very edge of completely breaking through, you know? If it helps, try re-reading the post and think of things from your character's point of view. What would they notice that's out of place? Or maybe, what would they be trying to do? And how were they going to do that?