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Here's some fixes this article still needs:
Please link
central nervous system on wikipedia when you mention CNS and
enantiomer when you say that word.
So, it says how it affects Nekovalkyrja and Minkan and is listed with KS. If this can be sold to Yamatai, you need to get
@Wes in here to say yay or nay there.
What other factions is this on the market for?
This is a run-on sentence that needs to be broken up into smaller sentences with more punctuation:
"For the duration of the drug’s effect fatigue is but a distant memory and they find themselves able to run without feeling the sting of lactic acid in their muscles, able to think and react quicker it is easy to see why some people liken it to a biological overlock of one’s systems albeit temporary."
What would happen to the user if they received some sort of physical trauma while on this drug? How does pain from a new or old wound affect them?