Approved Submission [Horizon] URSA A.T.U.

just seeing as it it made of a different material to the hull ;p

I think 1 KS is worth $2 USD but I don't really know for sure. I'd say 100,000 KS would fit the bill for such a big boy.

bumped the price up to 100k

This review is for: URSA Transport

The submitted article is/has…
[ ✔] A very high level of overall quality
[✔ ] A general topic sentence under the title header
[✔ ] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)\\
[ ✔] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[ ✔] In the proper format/template
[✔ ] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[✔ ] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[✔ ] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[✔ ] No red and/or broken links
[✔ ] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[✔ ] Reasonably neutral point of view

The submitted article is/does not…
[✔ ] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[ ✔] Obtusely redundant
[✔ ] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[✔ ] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[✔ ] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[✔ ] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[✔ ] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[✔ ] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[ ✔] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[ ✔] Lacking Detail
[✔ ] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)

The article has…
[ ✔] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[ ✔] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[✔ ] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[ ✔] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.


Summary
** I'll we looking forward to that art!

Status: Approved.

woohoo

Nah that article is over here.

corp:galactic_horizon:gh-k9-3o_ursa

also, I fixed the link

Fixed the positioning of some doors on the vehicle seeing as they were in the wrong place.

@Rizzo the art has been finished and added

Dude, that art is the boss, but it's those turrets bro! They're driving me nuts man! That big ol Cannon is just not a machine gun! I'll tell you what, the recoilless gravity Cannon, I'll let you stick a pair of them in the big turret and just say S6 gets them at cost. You'd still be within the weapon limitations. What do ya say?