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I made some quick edits along the lines of grammar, formatting, etc and also DM'd GrammarPaladin with a link here, as he showed interest a few days ago :]
If I haven't already said it before, praise be unto our lord and savior Ame. Now with that out of the way, the character looks good, and is a good Candidate to replace my NPC Glynn Shields (Essentially the same character on the surface). If the folks over at NSMC 309th won't have you I'll straddle you up on the roof of our ship if need be.
We're in the middle of a mission, but I can always try to phase your character in without too much insanity (hopefully). Let me know if you're interested buddo, i'm trying to be more active as well