Star Army

Star ArmyⓇ is a landmark of forum roleplaying. Opened in 2002, Star Army is like an internet clubhouse for people who love roleplaying, art, and worldbuilding. Anyone 18 or older may join for free. New members are welcome! Use the "Register" button below.

Note: This is a play-by-post RPG site. If you're looking for the tabletop miniatures wargame "5150: Star Army" instead, see Two Hour Wargames.

Abandoned Submission KE-09-5A Ferret T.O.R.I

Wes

Founder & Admin
Staff Member
FM of Yamatai
STO Fleet Member
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ❌ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ❌ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ❌ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ❌ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ❌ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ❌ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Here's some fixes this article still needs:

1. WIP URL was submitted in the Destination URL field, edit if possible.
2. Please rearrange into the drone template
3. Style: URL in the middle of the page needs to be made into a wiki link. Also, there's some parts that need grammar fixes (no period at the end of sentences, for example).
4. There's a ton of things referenced in the article and none of them are linked. Please fix that!

When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!
 

SchererSoban

Site Supporter
Though have a question, does the Star Army have anything to check for atmospheric conditions that is already in a military platform ?
 

Wes

Founder & Admin
Staff Member
FM of Yamatai
STO Fleet Member
Not sure, but that sounds useful.
 

SchererSoban

Site Supporter
Ame going to put this on hold for now having some trouble with it so going to revisit it at a later time can put this in unapproved for now while I work on it later.
 

Ametheliana

Sensei
Staff Member
Submissions Reviewer
FM of Nepleslia
FM of the Iromakuanhe
Game Master
Alright, seems like Wes was interested so it'd be neato to come back to. If you need any help, my door is open.
 

SirSkully

FM of NDC
FM of Neshaten
Game Master
Oh I uh spoke to Scherer about this a while back but I'll be taking this over and finishing it off
 

Ametheliana

Sensei
Staff Member
Submissions Reviewer
FM of Nepleslia
FM of the Iromakuanhe
Game Master
Make a new thread when you have finished the submission, then, please.
 
Top