Just catching up here, and here's my thoughts.
1. It's okay to have opinions about submissions but
I don't want anyone being jerks about stuff. "Say your piece
nicely and get out" is the best method.
2. Apparently this Neo-Seraph's already being played in my plot so I guess it exists already. Not sure anyone noticed? It's basically just Ethereal giving his player character a hookup. As a GM I don't care for it but as a submissions mod it seems like fair game.
3. I get a sense, probably because this article pulls from old over-powered-as-hell Seraph article written during the era of the NH-2 and NH-7, that this body is designed for 2005-era SARP and not the more relaxed SARP of today. I guess my feelings are mixed between: "Yeah, this seems OP but it'll fit in fine," and "Do we really need an article for a species that's a body only one dude will use" (see Neo-Caelisolans - if you search on the wiki there's only two of them and one is Iemochi).
4. There is no need to compare this against Nekovalkyrja, so I'm not going to. It's literally against the rules to use old submissions to judge the power of new ones. Each submission has to stand on its own.
5. A key question is: Who/What would approving this submission actually affect? And the answer I think is basically nobody but Ethereal. And I'm not sure if anyone will have a positive or negative effect from it. It's basically just fluff.
6. No new tech is used that didn't already exist in SARP.
With these in mind I'm going to move on to the review.
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
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] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and the article template. Is all the information for struct present?
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] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
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] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
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] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
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] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
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] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and credited in the OOC section.
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] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
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] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
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] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Here are some fixes this article still needs:
1. Needs a history section.
2. Needs to specify how often they can reproduce because it looks like self-replicating Army that doubles every 30 minutes as written. Don't go nuts.
When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!