Charmaylarg Dufrain
🎖️ Game Master
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- Nepleslia
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- I agree
A patrol hover-car for use in the NPF
@Legix for not only Ken-Tec stuff but also for NPF usage.
@Legix for not only Ken-Tec stuff but also for NPF usage.
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Approved Submission [NPF] Ken-TEC Enforcer
- Thread starter Charmaylarg Dufrain
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Charmaylarg Dufrain
🎖️ Game Master
If thats the case, I'm fine with postponing this article until the mana-orb is finished as to add it to the enforcer. Or re-submiting it afterwards with the addition of it.
@Charmaylarg Dufrain - I've gone ahead and marked this as "On Hold" for now.
@Charmaylarg Dufrain - now that the Mana Orb's been approved, I'm marking this as a "New Submission."
Edit: I’ll review this, unless someone else does so first (which will probably happen, as I have a couple of other submissions “queued up” ahead of this one. (Sorry... >.<)
Edit: I’ll review this, unless someone else does so first (which will probably happen, as I have a couple of other submissions “queued up” ahead of this one. (Sorry... >.<)
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Here are some fixes this article still needs:
Status: Pending
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.[
] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.[
] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.[
] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.[
] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.[
] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.[
] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).[
] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.[
] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.[
] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.Here are some fixes this article still needs:
- Would you mind adding a sentence - that details what material(s) the Enforcer's armor is made out of - to the Onboard Systems Description section, please?
- Would you mind adding a "Damage Capacity" section (similar to the one in the Djinni's article, for instance) to the article, please? It would go under the Speeds section and - in my opinion - should list the Enforcer as being a Tier 7 (Light Mecha) unit.
Status: Pending
Charmaylarg Dufrain
🎖️ Game Master
Added reference and linking to the Kentec mana-orb, Damage rating, And what the enforce is composed of for general materials being mostly durnadium, hard rubber and layered thermoplastic polymer.
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Status: Approved
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.[
] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.[
] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.[
] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.[
] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.[
] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.[
] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).[
] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.[
] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.[
] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.Status: Approved
Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...
[
] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread[
] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki[
] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to[
] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section[
] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)
