Alright, I'll take care of this one since no one else snagged it up first.
Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
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] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
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] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
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] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
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] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
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] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
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] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
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] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
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] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
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] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Here's some fixes this article still needs:
1. I feel like this should be made with the
Clothing Item Template, since it's not quite power armor but is still a wearable piece of equipment.
2. Please link to the article for JANEs.
3. There should be text giving a short overview of the item just below the title of the page. You could possibly move the piece of text underneath the statistics to above the image.
When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!