Approved Submission OH-K1 Bulldog Main Battle Tank

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One of the sub-articles (desertwind) I notice the text description in appearance should go above the image. On the same article, many of the sub-headers don't have text after them and before the bullet lists. There are also two OOC sections on that one.

Why does the main weapon have two tiers? I said this, which did not get changed earlier:
The 110mm gauss cannon is going to need to have one DR tier.
Otherwise, looks good and great, Alex. Nice changes and additions have been made! Thanks for doing them!
 

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The 110mm Gauss Cannon has two tiers, one is the damage it does directly to the target, and the other is the splash damage it does within a radius, because it would be silly to have it be doing the same damage within that area as it does to the target it impacts directly.

The problems in the Desert Wind Autocannon have been fixed.
 

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For myself and future reference, I looked back and it looks like area of effect can have secondary stats, but that is based on the implication here:
It should cap at Heavy Anti-Capital. I don't mind fluff text and secondary stats painting this as an extremely potent weapon as far as range and area-of-effect are concerned.
Anyway, on to approval:

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✔ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✔ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✔ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✔ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✔ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ ✔ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✔ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✔ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✔ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✔ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Approved