Approved Character Razeal Kresh

[RazealK]

Good Questions Fian, thank you.
I made the char 24 because I am 25 irl. Thus, I have a good idea where he's at in life. =D
I was wondering about the Yamatain biology, but I can't seem to think of any other skills to add.

 

[Fian]

Since ships run on those god awfully complicated technologies and fire all kinds of thingamajigs, you should consider Mathematics ( Which also includes physics ). And also chemistry too, for making new ship alloys.

 

[Tom]

Drop your skills down to 7.

I recommend removing the biology one, as it doesn't really have anything to do with his dreams of shipbuilding.

I also suggest weakening his information tech skill to make him stand out as a designer of ships, not an operator.

Information Tech: Replace indepth knowledge of computers with working knowledge. He can operate computers on ships proficiently, rather than "operate most any ship." Delete every mention of his abilities regarding hacking or counterhacking.

Designing ships doesn't mean he's a pro with the ship's operating system. That's what we have the computer scientists for.

That being said, after you do the 8th edit of this sheet (following my suggestions), consider the character...

APPROVED!

 

[Concerto]

OOC: Eighth draft. It never ends. And the road that never ends..leads to me.

Does that mean we never have to meet you? ^^;

 

[RazealK]

Oh funny man! Most likey, due to my social anxiety or paranoia, you won't ;;>.>