Jack Pine
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Hey guys, here with yet another nade. This is a HE version. Who doesn't love more boom.
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Approved Submission S6-HEG
- Thread starter Jack Pine
- Start date
IQ
Well-Known Member
I'll be taking over this submission and will do the required edits, per Jack's request.
I see why the muzzle velocity table could be removed. Though the pricing, with images present of the packs or crates would most likely become a mess and a half if put into bullet points, I'd rather keep that in to keep the art provided neat.
I see why the muzzle velocity table could be removed. Though the pricing, with images present of the packs or crates would most likely become a mess and a half if put into bullet points, I'd rather keep that in to keep the art provided neat.
FrostJaeger
Banned Member
Fair enough, @IQ, as the Weapon Template has a table in its ammunition pricing section.
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Here are some fixes this article still needs:
Status: Pending
Edit: Also - and my apologies for not including this originally - please unabbreviate the title of the article in order to avoid conflicting with the Style Guide.
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.[
] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.[
] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.[
] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.[
] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.[
] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.[
] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).[
] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.[
] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.[
] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.Here are some fixes this article still needs:
- Please add a brief sentence to the sections with a FIXME in them.
Status: Pending
Edit: Also - and my apologies for not including this originally - please unabbreviate the title of the article in order to avoid conflicting with the Style Guide.
FrostJaeger
Banned Member
IQ
Well-Known Member
Like the TWF, I'm no fan. And seeing as it's a change requested very late into the article, can we please keep it as is? I'd think anyone browsing it would realize S6 is in fact Section 6. It would make the title far more lengthy as well, which I don't think is a good thing ^^'
FrostJaeger
Banned Member
Unfortunately, I must insist that it be changed. Sorry... >v<
FrostJaeger
Banned Member
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Status: Approved
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[ ] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.[
] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.[
] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.[
] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.[
] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.[
] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.[
] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).[
] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.[
] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.[
] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.Status: Approved
Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...
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] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread[
] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki[
] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to[
] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section[
] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)
