Approved Submission Scarecrows combat armor (non powerarmor)

[ShadowWalker]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=wip:faction:uso:scarecrows:security_combat_armor

Submission Faction(s)

Submission Terms

1. I agree

I request that Jager nor Mecha reveiw this


And to make it absolutely clear it non power armor so there is no confusion

 

[ShadowWalker]

@Alex I'm going to ask you please stay out of the conversation I've asked you to not talk to me and I've heard Wes ask you the same thing please respect my wishes

 

[Arbitrated]

I suggest putting that into the article itself for clarity ^~^

 

[Ametheliana]

What Arbs said, it's not enough to just answer these questions in the thread. They need to be in the article.

Here's the rule on that:
If a question/objection is raised during the review, it is not acceptable to merely answer in the forum thread; the wiki article must also be edited to reflect the response.

 

[Jack Pine]

I'll help him make the edits

 

[SirSkully]

For hopping into and out of the armour I can provide some examples:
here
here
aaaaand here

but 2/3 of these are bodysuits and not armoured suits so the 2nd link might be the most helpful

 

[Ametheliana]

It's really cool to see assistance being offered! @Esscast did you see this?

 

[Jack Pine]

I have helped him make edits to the article. Added a few missing sections and filled them out for his modifications afterward. Hopefully that should include all needed fields of info now. If not I can add those too for him if he also wishes. I'll provide any help he needs to get this nice and lined out.

 

[Ametheliana]

@FrostJaeger could probably look, as reviewer, then?

 

[FrostJaeger]

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Here are some fixes this article still needs:

1. Would you mind reducing the range of the armor's radio system to, say, 500 kilometers, please? In my official opinion, a range of 1 light-year is too much for a body armor's radio system - and 500 kilometers should be more than enough for ground-to-orbit and ground-to-ground communications. (For reference, Earth's atmosphere - according to a quick google search - is 480 kilometers in "height.")
2. In the Armor Size section, would you mind including how much the Security Combat Armor adds to its wearer's length, width, and height, please?

When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!

Status: Pending

Edit: Thanks for assisting Esscast with this, Jack! ovob
Edit #2: Updated to reflect this post.

 

[IQ]

@FrostJaeger Didn't Jack post his FM approval on the first page of this submission? Or does he need to re-state his approval with the changes and am I missing something?

 

[FrostJaeger]

...Oh.

*facepalm*

My apologies, @Jack Pine - I missed the approval post you made earlier in this thread - and thanks for catching that, @IQ. I've edited my second review accordingly.

 

[Jack Pine]

@FrostJaeger I've gone and made the edits for Esscast given he has been rather busy lately.

 

[FrostJaeger]

Thanks for helping @Esscast with this submission, @Jack Pine! ovob

[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.

Status: Approved

Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...

[ ] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
[ ] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki
[ ] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
[ ] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
[ ] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)

Edit: Would another submission reviewer mind moving the article to its final destination on the wiki, please?

 

[Ametheliana]

I was going to move it, but would it be a Section 6 gear, now, or? @Jack Pine let me know the true destination URL so I can move it, or move it for Esscast, please.