@Esscast told me via PM that he wanted to have this submission made "active" again, thus:
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
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] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
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] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
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] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
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] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
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] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ N/A ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
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] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
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] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
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] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Here are some fixes this article still needs:
- As this submission was created using the Custom Apparel Guide, would you mind formatting it according to the Clothing Item Template, please? The Nomenclature Information can be included in the template's "Page Title" section.
- Once you format the article according to the aforementioned Clothing Item Template, would you mind adding a "Damage Capacity" sub-section (similar to the one found in the Power Armor Template) to the "Design" section, please? The Integrated Armor's tier would in my official opinion be:
- Tier 1 (Light Personnel) if the armor is integrated below or onto Frank's skin.
- Tier 3 (Heavy Personnel) if the armor is separate from Frank (like, say, the Golem Assault Armor).
- Would you mind adding a link to Frank's character article, please?
- The article needs to have a lot more detail then it currently has. Consider, for instance, the following:
- Is this armor physically integrated into (or onto) Frank - or is it a separate body armor like the aforementioned Golem?
- If the armor was integrated beneath or onto Frank's skin, when (YE 40?) and by whom (Psychopomp?) was such a complex and delicate surgical procedure carried out?
- If it's a separate body armor, what's its appearance - and how is it maintained?
- Who designed and/or produced the armor?
- @Legix and @Zack, the respective Faction Managers of the Democratic Imperium of Nepleslia and Uso's Star Organization, need to post their approval of the submission in this thread.
When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!
Status: Pending
Edit: Apologies if I came across as blunt - I had to type this in kind of a hurry due to stuff that came up IRL. >.<