Good looking article as always, Andrew. Lets take a look~
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I only see two things that pop up to me.
Aether power is currently restricted to the major factions with origin as an exception. So while the 1B version is fine, Any 1A will need an alternate power source.
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Can you expand on
Negotiable as a price point for the 1A version? Such as asking them to contact a representative, giving an example for a price depending on location, etc. Cause otherwise its rather vague. This seems like a very important ship for smaller corps that lack manpower but still want to import/export so I'm sure it will be popular and not knowing any basis for a price is something that needs to be fixed. (Cause I def want one for Shasta crop at one point~)
@Andrew that's all there is to is! Those two seem rather simple requests before it can be moved on to approval.