wes i made the art on hero machine 3Please add art credits.
Ill put that down but its called the V2 mostly cause the V1 used to be on the site 5 years agoA few small things, you might want to put the dimensions of the ammo on that respective page since they're not listed there, maybe also say the round uses a discarding sabot? Just for the cartridge in the art to make a bit more sense (that's just a possible suggestion, not a demand). And finally the line about sending it back to Nepleslia could use some refinement, because it currently makes it seem like they wouldn't know how to make dual stage gyrojets lol.
I'm also not sure why it's a v2 when there's no v1 on the wiki but that's a minor gripe, put measurements on the ammo page and reword that line about nepleslia a bit and I'm happy to approve it for the nepper market.
Okay, I've made the edits.A few small things, you might want to put the dimensions of the ammo on that respective page since they're not listed there, maybe also say the round uses a discarding sabot? Just for the cartridge in the art to make a bit more sense (that's just a possible suggestion, not a demand). And finally the line about sending it back to Nepleslia could use some refinement, because it currently makes it seem like they wouldn't know how to make dual stage gyrojets lol.
I'm also not sure why it's a v2 when there's no v1 on the wiki but that's a minor gripe, put measurements on the ammo page and reword that line about nepleslia a bit and I'm happy to approve it for the nepper market.
your good man its okayLike I said, it was a very minor thing, now I know lol.
also the art for the ammo is purely a placeholder for likeness until i can afford a proper artbit for itIs the ammo caseless? It kind of looks like it. Or am I missing something? At the moment I'm just going purely off the art. Or is it a Gyrojet?
thanks ill get right on thatHey Shadow Walker,
A couple of things I noticed that might help, I'm not officially an NTSE reviewer but I used to be.
Anyway just thought I'd help out.
- The Ammunition Page - there is a template for Ammunition Ammunition Template on Star Army Space Roleplay
- The Ammunition Page should have links back to the weapon page and other wiki pages.
- I fixed some minor spelling and grammar for you (You spelled Nepleslian wrong)
- On the weapons page and the ammunition page stuff in the top paragraph and the about section could be wikified.
will do, sorry for the hassleHi ShadowWalker,
I looked this over, again there needs to be some wikification in the top paragraphs of both pages. Also in the History section, there should be date references. The alignment of your text in the tables needs to be corrected as well. Some grammar, capitalization, and spelling mistakes are still evident on both pages, I fixed some for you. I suggest free Grammarly or a similar app help with the issues. If you need some help, feel free to reach out.
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