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Approved Submission Spectre Mk. II Re-Submission

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FrostJaeger

Banned Member
Submission URL
https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=items:power_armors:spectre_mkii
Submission Faction(s)
  1. Yamatai (except Elysia)
  2. Elysia
  4. NDC
Submission Terms
  1. I agree
For Reviewers:
  • Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No.
  • Contains Links to Unapproved Articles? No.
  • Contains New Art? No.
  • Previously Submitted? Yes; marked as abandoned due to a lack of response from the submitter.
  • Changelog: N/A
  • Checklist Requested? Yes.
As I promised here, I'm submitting this on behalf of @Rizzo. Tagging @Blizzard and @Kai due to the usage of Frontier Service Corporation and Origin Industries products in this submission; for a complete list of the numerous technologies used in this submission, see the spoiler below.
 
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Nothing substantial. I found that I accidentally claimed the hardpoints were on the base of the wings but they were meant to be on the lower legs per some advice I'd previously been given but it I've made the appropriate edit.
 
@Legix, don't even read it. Just approve. That's it, you got it. Just go down to the bottom of the screen, left side. Now click the drop tab...
 
Rejected. Until I read it and approve it.

Read it; looks the same and zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzApproved. Or Rejectedn't.

Edit: I would do all the things I normally need to do but instead I'm going to just move this thread. I expect you to handle renaming and that small checklist that normally gets slapped on of things you need to get done (like adding an approval note and all that jazz).
 
Thanks dude! I got those little details.

This review is for: Spectre Mk.II

[ ✔ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✔ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ ✔ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✔ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✔ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ ✔ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
[ ✔ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ ✔ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✔ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✔ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.



Status: Approved.
 
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