Approved Submission The Tsumi

[IQ]

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=species:tsumi

List Any Unapproved Sub-Articles

• Liberation Wars
• Saweyan Church
• Simpleton Rebellion
• Teryan
• The Ascendance
• The Binary Blood War

Submission Faction(s)

1. Neshaten

Submission Terms

1. I agree

Submission Type: Species
Template Used: Species template

Faction: Neshaten sub-faction
FM Approved Yet? No
Faction requires art? Yes(?) - Species require art nonetheless.

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? No - still looking for artists to at least get one piece done. Also checking and debating my funds regarding.
Previously Submitted? No

Other notes: Better strap in. This is a lengthy one.

 

[Alex Hart]

Is this approved? I don't see the final part of the approval process, so I can't be sure whether or not it is.

 

[IQ]

I am not too sure myself :S

 

[IQ]

,@META_mahn I swear if you forgot the approval sticker

 

[Ametheliana]

He did say:

Word of god it is! Congrats the totally not demon people are usable in SARP.

Meta, please begin using the word "approved" in your end of reviews, and let us know the sub-articles are within it, too.

I don't want to say, "Consider it this..." And be wrong, but I don't believe my commentary changes the article or anything to a point where my opinion really changes its current status set by @META_mahn.

 

[Ametheliana]

Have you made any changes to the approved article, @IQ? You moved the page out of wip but it has no OOC info for the approval thread, yet.

I also saw you make a bunch of basically blank pages outside of the wip namespace and had to edit their titles, which were vague like "start" and "technology". I just added the word "Tsumi" to the titles so that they could be easily distinguished in wiki searches. Articles with missing content can and will be deleted, as outlined here.

Here are the offending articles I have found:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:species:tsumi:technology:guns:start
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:species:tsumi:technology
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:species:tsumi:technology:armour

 

[Alex Hart]

@META_mahn has yet to go through the final step of approval apparently.

 

[META_mahn]

@Ametheliana Those offending articles are placeholder I'm pretty sure. Not yet linked to main. That'll have to be submitted after the fact but I recommend users submit their core faction before tech anyways, so whatever.

Added the OOC data, so now the Tsumi are fully usable.

 

[META_mahn]

Hi, I'm checklist. I'm the in-law of the in-law of checklist. Does that make me twice as bad as a regular in-law or is it exponential?

[ YES ] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
[ YES ] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki
[ YES ] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
[ YES ] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
[ YES ] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)

1. said other articles aren't done yet lul

 

[IQ]

Made the requested changes. I did not however, move the page.

The mentioned articled, guns and armour will ultimately become pages to link Tsumi guns and armour- they're not submissions, though they are already there since there will be Tsumi tech submissions as early as today.

The start one is a mistake though

 

[Ametheliana]

I get where you're going with those pages, then, and their creation makes a lot more sense. Thanks, IQ.