This review is for: The U-1 Variable Mecha update
The submitted article is/hasβ¦
[ Y] A very high level of overall quality
[ Y] A general topic sentence under the title header
[ Y] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)
[ Y] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[ Y] In the proper format/template
[ Y] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[ Y] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[ N] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[ Y] No red and/or broken links
[ Y] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[ Y] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does notβ¦
[ N] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[ N] Obtusely redundant
[ N] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[ N] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[ N] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[ N] Use second-person language (βyouβ or βyourβ) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[ N] Use bombastic language (βvirtually immune,β βnearly indestructible,β βinsanely powerful,β βhorrible effectsβ)
[ N] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[ N] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[ N] Lacking Detail
[ N] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)
The article hasβ¦
[Y ] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[Y ] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[ Y] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[Y ] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.
Summary
I'll ask mostly for a little bit of clarity and such-can you link to the RP threads regarding the agreements on weapons and such?
Also, regarding the repairs section, remove the period inside the parentheses and it's coolio! ^^
Status: Pending
I intend to finish this review by: To be honest, tomorrow should be fine if not later today.