I can't speak for artists right now, but already, it's looking better. I recommend you use some bolding for the individual description points, as well as some of the bullet points. Speaking of, the bullet points might look better if they weren't spaced apart like that, but I'll leave that up to you. Both "Features" and "Color Style According to Rank" is probably better off either made into headers of smaller size or bolded. Other than that, I'm willing to approve it unless there's any objections.