Well, possibly, but the entire article lacks the proper 'wiki-fication'. No linking to Yamatai, or Mishhu, or Parasites, no linking to the Timeline when years are mentioned, no linking to named characters, you make reference to an Origin Station when I assume you mean the
Vekimen Colony Station, no link to the VDTF, no link to whatever the Immense Orbital class of structure is. You seem to refer to IC times of production by OOC months, but I might be confusing something there. No link to what types of shuttles it has, just 'varied shuttles'.
Why does a space station need FTL capabilities?
I could go on all night.