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Okay firstly, here are some minor alterations to the article I made;
- I removed the double spacing on the nomenclature, to make things more tight, since it's bulleted you don't need to use wide spaces.
- There were two types of apostrophe used in the article, and it was small, but they did look different when the article was being viewed, so I went through and changed it to one type.
- I added Sachiko to the Nomenclature data as the designer, if that's not true you can put who designed it instead.
- Minor grammar and punctuation changes. Mostly it was just changing the tense of words of punctuation, but there were a few places there the wording had to be altered to flow properly. (The meaning is still the same for everything)
A comparison of all the changes I made can be found
here.
Now as for things that need to be done for this article to be finished;
- First, the price. We need to have a listed price there, and then you can make a note about the price being different for different places. But you want the notation to be brief and to the point
- Also we need to get FM approvals. @Wes as the FM of Yamatai and @Soresu as the FM of Iroma, then a note needs to be made in the article about what factions standard systems does it work with (which is the list of factions that approved)