The skills section is optional, but so long as it's there, it'd help to have more specifics. Especially under Engineering and Construction, it doesn't tell me much about what she can do under those headings. Does she have any specialties? As a combat engineer, it also might be worth mentioning if she knows how to use weapons that aren't covered by the Star Army Common Skills. The Star Army Infantry occupation page might have some inspiration. According to the SACS page, the ability to drive (two specific) light vehicles is already implied, if you want to trim or expand on that.
I'm fine with the rest. This isn't a plot where I need a backstory I can 'work with', since the focus is on investigation, exploration, and combat, rather than on the characters, to put it simply. I like the personality section. The physical description doesn't tell me much outside of the bullet points, I don't know what a 'function over form' person looks like. Stocky, maybe? You can delete the two empty fields, it's not critical for us to know her weight.
So... Approved.