Incorrect on 2a, it IS copypasta since it copies some of the text from one article to another. Please rewrite the sentence or you can remove the sentence from the Rev article so as to make this a stand alone component, and then mention that it can be used by the armor as well.
Incorrect on 1a, in it's current iteration it has no use since it is similar in form and function to the one found in the Revanant article.
When we do the DR value for the armor it is the value of the entire armor itself, not it's individual components. This helmet is just one small piece of that armor, and thus it alone shouldn't have the armor value of an entire suit of armor. Once again, please lower it.
Finally: the use is to have a helmet that can be used with other systems. However since the NTSE is non-functional right now it’ll probably be another month or two before the sub components even get looked at and I can’t post the overall article for a modular power armor without enough components to actually make the armor.
I'm here trying to work with you and help you understand the problems with this article, Code of Conduct Rule 1 states: We expect and require respectful behavior. What you posted was disrespectful considering someone is trying to help you out. If you continue to display this kind of behavior I will be forced to reject an article that I feel only has a few flaws that could be solved rather quickly by making a few edits.
Checklist:
[ x ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ️x ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
[ x ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ x ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ x ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate
[ - ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels (this one is debatable)
[ x ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
[ / ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ / ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ x ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Please fix the aformentioned problems.
Edit: Having just found out that this might be a rip of another users article(Jacks), I am putting this submission on-hold temporarily.