I think at least a summary with possible links to the things they did needs to be there. People should not have to comb through forums to find out the RP history. You need to at least link directly to the area in question, Preferably accompanied with a summary.
The reading order page doesn't have summaries until like the last 3 arcs <.< and they're all from the position of the players, not the faction. So it doesn't offer us much insight into what the faction itself has done. If they haven't done anything really significant in RP just say that. But if they have just type a simple summary of those things.
- An exact figure of how many Natural Patricians are in his faction
I'm going to go with 1 in 10,000 is a natural patrician. The rest are lower class slaves / ST copies / ect. It'll be easier to break down what the other part is once I have articles for the new body types.
50,000
Patricians is a figure I can certainly agree to.
- How much in the way of resources they took
Probably a starbase and a handful of starships. The starter answer is 'enough to get them going' and the end of the answer is 'I won't be reusing any Elysian ships'.
Which starbase are you referring to,
@Zack? One of the eight
Rampart-class Fortresses? I'm curious about the same information regarding the "handful of starships" you mentioned - which classes (remember that to the best of my knowledge only "
modern" ships were actively in service by that point in time), from which
fleet did they originally come from, and exactly how many is a "handful?"
Additionally, would you mind adding an "Assets" section to the
main page detailing your answers to the above questions, includes the "fleet" and "massive starbases" mentioned
here, and the "Grand Fleet" mentioned in the
history section,
@Zack?
I'm not trying to "move the goalposts" or burden you with the task of creating any additional submissions for their new ships or for their structures - I'm just curious as to what exactly they have available in terms of assets.
- Along with ST tech and the Seraph tech, what other Elysian technology are they bringing with them
Whatever Elysian tech they had on hand. They'd have access to everything from around YE:34.
Wouldn't they only have access to anything prior to or in
YE 32, seeing as how that's when their "exodus" occurred (as written in
this planning post)?
- Information on the leader of this faction, considering he likely would've been a prominent figure prior to leaving
The faction is run by a senate, this is included in the submission.
I'm afraid I'm going to have to agree with what
@Reynolds said
here - would you mind at least using the
Random Elysian Generator to come up with, oh, five or six of the more prominent senators? As
@Reynolds wrote in the aforementioned post:
I'm sure there's some important ones that have held down a seat every year so far, one that has a majority of seats/votes compared to the others, or maybe there's a troublemaker or hardliner people need to worry about. Maybe just list their name and one broad description for them so people have some idea who they are?
- Some information regarding anything out of their system they would've done (because Elysia and by extension Yamatai probably would've kept an eye on them. Technically I think they'd still be an enemy of Yamatai)
See the
reading order page or the
GM page for what the Elysians have been up to. In short they've been carving out their domain among the various colonies out west.
As
@Syaoran and
@Wes pointed out...
I think at least a summary with possible links to the things they did needs to be there. People should not have to comb through forums to find out the RP history. You need to at least link directly to the area in question, Preferably accompanied with a summary.
The reading order page doesn't have summaries until like the last 3 arcs <.< and they're all from the position of the players, not the faction. So it doesn't offer us much insight into what the faction itself has done. If they haven't done anything really significant in RP just say that. But if they have just type a simple summary of those things.
Great suggestion! It's important to add RP history sections to all articles on the wiki.
Thanks Zack for making the requested updates!
...there, in my humble opinion, needs to be
something that describes what the
4th Great Elysian Celestial Empire has done thus far in the setting. It doesn't have to be a novel, of course - but would you please add a couple of short paragraphs (three or four sentences, plus links to the appropriate forum threads) describing what's occurred in the setting thus far,
@Zack?
There is also already a stub entry for the planet on the article. But if it gets us past this I'll move that over to a new article.
@Zack Would you mind doing this as well and then submit it for review, please?
Once the additions/concerns/etc. detailed above have been addressed (with the exception of the
Patricians, of course, given that it's already been resolved) I'll be ready to go ahead and approve this submission, barring any further concerns raised by others.