Cool I double check the second on your tooks fix it her in a minute.Sean_ODuibher said:While you're checking your post you may want to change:
Between Brian describing the Yamataians fleeing as:phacon said:Kame *cursed* herself pulled up her rifle and quickly dashed after the south most one, that went back the direction they game.
and my description of Eun-Kyung's pursuit as:Nashoba said:One moving to her left, and another to the right. The last life sign was moving the fastest and was moving away from her.
I thought it was clear that Eun-Kyung had chased down the one that, having broken directly away, could be described ahead and moving south.Sean_ODuibher said:Eun-Kyung broke into a sprint, chasing after the Yamataian directly ahead of her while powering up her plasma engines.
edit: Another thing you might want to change is that Eun-Kyung has radioed Kame twice now, not once.
Yeah umm.. that was intentional because I was orginally going to reply to Nashoba post before you replied but I hadn't had a chance ^^;
I put that part in the past tense and make it sound like your character couldn't possibly have heard her first reply and give a second.
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Also Aendri, I pretty sure the LUT you to are heading towards is currently a birds nest <_<;