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OOC Aeon Discussion

Sorry, I was on vacation last week. That, and I got confused and forgot to ask things to clarify. What exactly is going on, now?
 
The main group of the Away team are now inside the Genus.

While those at the shuttle are dealing with a different situation.
 
Nashoba said:
Depends on the kind of extinguisher material.
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Yeah, This is why I specified the extinguisher as being for Class D Fires or Electrical Fires. Ironically in the original I explained that more <_<.

Incidently, did Kim-san close the shuttle doors or not?
I was going to start fumigation if she did, or curse if she didn't ^_^;;

Either way you guys will probably see option three... the slightly crazy one... >->ll



Also, my character currently suspects the beetles are cause behind the zombie state that they Genius-team saw... so I might post something to that effect.
 
Kim did not close the shuttle door because if she did you couldn't start your fumigation.

So you can activate what you want and close the door. And to my knowledge no one from the crew who went to Genus said anything about zombies.
 
Two questions! One, which deck is the Away Team on, and two, are they on the port or starboard side of the ship?
 
Technically the woman, Kim was in the Medbay, status unknown.. :twisted:
 
So, to "send" messages to other team and the Aeon crew itself, I

Code: 
write it in code like this, though with proper addressing. Am I correct? Also, to 'send' files, I write it something like
Attatched "File.exe"

or something like that?
 
Kame *cursed* with herself pulled up her rifle and quickly dashed after the southmost one, that went back the direction they game. Her instint was to attempt to shot his legs, but the Shoi had said no firing, which included using pistols on stun.

Slowly she ran after the yamatain; however, her suit was still slightly tight so it was a struggling hobble of much cursing. Ruffling in her bag, she looked for something to stop the intruder. Quickly she pulled out the first power armor part she could find and threw--- a Shoe. A Shoe!? she though as she gasped, who the hell throws a shoe? I mean everyone knows even out-of-shape political leaders can dodges flying shoes.

Kame then swore a she heard a pistol fire on stun and immediately pivoted around with her sniper rifle to make sure the Shoi was ok. Quickly she realized it her partner that fired and cursed lightly. Picking up a nearby rock she threw it as hard as she could at Yamatain and then rushed after her prey again. She was so focus that she compeletly didn't her the Shoi's first call.
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Dusky, please, please please run your posts through a word editor with spellcheck before posting. Or at least give them your own twice-over so you can avoid the numerous mistakes made in the post above.

You switch between past- and present-tense frequently. You misspell multiple words. Many of your sentences are grammatically incorrect.

Dude, it shouldn't pain me to read your posts. I'm not trying to be mean, but your posts need to look like there was some effort behind them.

Edit: Even if English isn't your native language. Posts shouldn't look that bad, simply because you can buy or download multiple programs for free that can fix these things.
 
SSharp said:
Dusky, please, please please run your posts through a word editor with spellcheck before posting. Or at least give them your own twice-over so you can avoid the numerous mistakes made in the post above.

You switch between past- and present-tense frequently. You misspell multiple words. Many of your sentences are grammatically incorrect.

Dude, it shouldn't pain me to read your posts. I'm not trying to be mean, but your posts need to look like there was some effort behind them.

Edit: Even if English isn't your native language. Posts shouldn't look that bad, simply because you can buy or download multiple programs for free that can fix these things.
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o_o .... Actually I already mentioned on IRC that this was the rough draft and I had not had a chance to spell/grammar check it. Didn't I mention that I was going to look over it today and later tonight?
 
While you're checking your post you may want to change:

phacon said:
Kame *cursed* herself pulled up her rifle and quickly dashed after the south most one, that went back the direction they game.
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Between Brian describing the Yamataians fleeing as:

Nashoba said:
One moving to her left, and another to the right. The last life sign was moving the fastest and was moving away from her.
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and my description of Eun-Kyung's pursuit as:

Sean_ODuibher said:
Eun-Kyung broke into a sprint, chasing after the Yamataian directly ahead of her while powering up her plasma engines.
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I thought it was clear that Eun-Kyung had chased down the one that, having broken directly away, could be described ahead and moving south.

edit: Another thing you might want to change is that Eun-Kyung has radioed Kame twice now, not once.
 
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