Rejected Character My character

[Jace]

Here's the link to my character https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:jace&#physical_characteristics if you see something wrong plz msg me about it

 

[Jace]

Okay for the sudden change its because if you look the heart breaker hasn't been as active for awhile. So I decided to find anthor active plot. The reason on most of the grammar issues is because, I do not have access to a computer so I cant get word and its kinda hard to edit through the phone. But I will still try to fix them tonight and please don't say no to me just because I'm using a phone.

 

[Nightowl]

Ow, phone. That explains a lot of things. Good luck.

 

[Rizzo]

Ow, phone. That explains a lot of things. Good luck.

I use my phone and I do just fine. Just gotta get the right note taking app.

 

[Jace]

Yea what type of phone I have windows phone and cant download much good apps.

 

[Rizzo]

Im using a samsung galaxy note 2. its not rooted but my friend made it faster so it's still fast despite being two models behind.

 

[Nightowl]

Whenever I type with a phone, I turn into a variant of the Khornite berserker. "Circuits for the circuit God!!!" *Hacks phone with axe*.

 

[Yoshi]

Well that being said, then I will have to see some major work done before I can consider your character one way or the other. At this point it has been three days since anything has been touched on the page.

 

[Yoshi]

At this time I have yet to see anything from the lists fixed, nor anything worked on for almost a week. I will Reject this character now. If there it is fix and re-submitted to me for the Soyokaze plot, I will look over it again and reevaluate it then.

 

[Jace]

Thanks I was going to ask Wes if he could because I'm searching the wiki and probably going to make a new character