So normally I don't do this, but with this main article, there is a big problem with the sentence structure. A lot of the sentences are run on sentences, to the point that it makes it a bit difficult to read. I'll have to ask you to go through and try to fix up the sentence structure, try to make the sentences shorter where you can, possibly breaking things up into two or more sentences. Also in the "About the armor" right under the first picture, it still has generic text there that should change.