Henry took a look at Harrison's digital penmanship. He then took his laptop, made a new line and jotted down the following: "Is this a knight in shining armour with a pistol, or is it a man who likes to show off by wearing silver plates over his clothes and enjoys slinging guns? It's a good concept, but you should flesh out the setting, and it'll be good. A good first try. However, if this is a short story, you can flesh out the setting midway or not at all."
When he heard the mention of "Neko" from the greeting Kokuten, he was a bit unsettled. He had a small beef against Yamatai for having a 'utopia' society, which to him was fundamentally flawed. He frowned slightly and creased his eyebrow, trying not to give away the wrong impression.
He was also out of his book, which also made him notice that Autumn was talking at the pace of a machine gun. He simply dismissed it as some overt happiness.