Notes on the latest posts:
Kyoto military base is pretty big. It's more likely to see rows of shuttles and parked Yui 4s than grass, although there is definately a lot of grass and trees around on Yamatai. As for clear skies, they're possible but rare on Yamatai - the Kyoto area is known for being cold and wet. No changes are needed though, if you want to keep it as is. Lastly, I wanted to point out, in regards to the captain's error in naming the shuttle, that Uriel was the name of the NDI's largest, most powerful starship, the
Orion D battleship (of which , only three exist - Ragnarok, Cataclysm, and of course, the NSS Uriel). Uriel is somewhat famous for its use in Ayenee-based conflicts which occured during the days of the Star Army's birth. It is famous, and was sometimes deridingly called the "NSS Urinal" by early Star Army personnel back in the days before the alliance with the Nerimians.