Nyton
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Sorry about that I'll try to be clearer in the future. Maybe not so introspective and such. I could possibly try using italics so that his thoughts are read out like his own rather than being narrated out.
The scene in the medbay was rather short I know. I got a little rushed towards the end there and wasn't able to write the Mara/nurses orgy add on. Sorry!
The scene in the medbay was rather short I know. I got a little rushed towards the end there and wasn't able to write the Mara/nurses orgy add on. Sorry!