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Approved Submission Psychopomp

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While I appreciate you going for this, Ace, you need to put more into it before we can review it. As it stands now, it doesn't rise to the level of a reviewable submission.

Make sure to go over this business template to get an idea of what we'll be looking for once you get it going. I understand it won't be a real company per se, but you'll need to at least start with this. As well, I recommend looking at a group like this one to see how to flesh it out more.

Placing this on hold for now.
 
I agree with Doshii. Give us a more finished product and we can critique from there. If you need help let us know.
 
Sounds good we can touch up one another we did come up with it together after all
 
So I'm thinking something like advanced prosthetics. Legs, arms, maybe even eyes.
 
Cool concept! Can't wait to see more.

But don't all new corporations need to be founded in "current year" if they aren't completely new setting elements (ex: Iroma needed industry at creation so could have grandfathered in companies)? I can recall other corps based in the Kikyo Sector (some that had strong existing background elements) that were still held to such policy.
 
@Alex sounds good

@raz did not know that but in both my characters and Alex's there is a mysterious unnamed company which augmented them so now we're giving it a face.
 
sometimes it comes up as facebook:dragon04779 or people have to search it up that way
 
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