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Approved Submission Psychopomp

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This is a good start, but you'll need to do a few more things.

1. Anything that can be a link to something else within the wiki, should be. Think names (to character pages), years, locations, important items/projects and pieces of description that can be linked back to actual RP.

2. You've created a good shell. We need more inside it. What kind of prosthetics does it pretend to make? What are some of its current projects? What do they cost? So on and so forth. Give us detail.

3. The introductory sentence can be more than the fake fluff. I'd use the text from the paragraph below to make it more clear in the intro paragraph that Psychopomp is a paramilitary company.
 
@Alex Hart this is What we need to do I'm having internet trouble over on my end so I wount be able to do much for a week or so if i can at all
 
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