This review is for: Revenant PA with URL
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:faction:uso:skyguard:project_spectre
The submitted article is/has…
[ ¤﹏¤] A very high level of overall quality
[ ¤﹏¤] A general topic sentence under the title header
[ ¤﹏¤] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)
[ ¤﹏¤] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[ ¤﹏¤] In the proper format/template
[ ¤﹏¤] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[ ¤﹏¤] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[ ¤﹏¤] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[ ¤﹏¤] No red and/or broken links
[ ¤﹏¤] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[ ¤﹏¤] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does not…
[ ¤﹏¤] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[ ¤﹏¤] Obtusely redundant
[ ¤﹏¤] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[ ¤﹏¤] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[ ¤﹏¤] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[ ¤﹏¤] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[ ¤﹏¤] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[ ¤﹏¤] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[ ¤﹏¤] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[ ¤﹏¤] Lacking Detail
[ ¤﹏¤] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)
The article has…
[ ¤﹏¤] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[ ¤﹏¤] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[ ¤﹏¤] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[ ¤﹏¤] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.
To the submitter: Is this a refit or overhaul of a previous article? If yes, provide a link and a list of changes.
Approved
[EDIT] I can't edit my post to get the top gif off lol