I personally don't like fourth-wall breaking IC references in a realistic plot, such as the Aeon. It breaks up the flow of the RP, to my mind. Still, the description of the turrets is fine, except for the bit about proton shields. I know you lifted most of the description from the star wars page, and it does mention a proton shield there. However, as far as I can find, there is no such thing as a proton shield in SARP. A small edit should suffice to fix that.