Thanks for point that out Sean. I meant to say Shina Kim, though my character would be just as concerned if you or anyone on the crew that she had recently lost.Sean_ODuibher said:Okay, I was going to post, but I really need Phacon to double check his post. You need to clarify whether you were writing about KIM Eun-Kyung Chui or Shina KIM Nito Heisho. It's a bit confusing at the moment.
Anyways, I grammar checked it, so it should be easier for people to read.
Enjoy. I am going to edit this, so people who have read it will know any other major changes.