I try to just think of it as going from Point A to Point B. You know your Point A, you figure out your Point B and think of how to get there. You could come up with a list of things you think would happen or some things you want to convey in this post like...
- Convey the developing Lone Wolf in Asher by putting him alone, emphasizing his name, and showing how aloof he can be to other peoples expectations. Could also be used in conjunction with the third option.
- Show the extent of Asher's brutality, unleashed bloodlust.
- Give the sensation of what's somewhat like Melisson saying, "You'll never truly fit in." in a subtle manner.
- Try to make the atmosphere consistent, by blowing things up.
- Insert at least one sexual in-yer-end-do.
- Insert one shred of humanity.